Ideas Pitch

Our pitch included a full description of narrative, storyboard, characters and backstory. We wanted to give an in detail overview of everything we plan to achieve through our opening.

Our first run though of this pitch proved to be slightly problematic, with our audience apparently confused by the in depth story explanation. It also lasted for a great amount of time

 and so we resolved to cut it down by the time we presented again. We were also lacking our drafted storyboard at the time of both recordings, which probably also impacted the ability to comprehensively understand our pitch, along with reading from drafts of many of our descriptions.